Grace in writing isn't just about elegant sentences; it's about making the entire passage flow. This is achieved through coherence, using connector words like 'however,' 'moreover,' and 'for example.' These seemingly small words act as the glue that links ideas, showing the reader how each sentence logically follows from the last.
In writing 'The 99% Invisible City,' one author focused on including the best possible individual stories, while the co-author prioritized ensuring they fit into a cohesive book structure. This creative tension forced them to justify each inclusion and resulted in a stronger, more balanced final product.
When faced with overwhelming research (290,000 words), author James Nestor found clarity by structuring his book around a simple, 20-day personal experiment. This narrative "through-line" provided a skeleton to hang complex topics on, making the book engaging and coherent.
Great writing is not a stroke of genius but a craft of intense iteration. Observing Y Combinator founder Paul Graham showed that he would rewrite a single sentence dozens of times to achieve clarity and impact. This process of refinement is the key to persuasive and concise communication, demystifying the path to becoming a better writer.
After years of study, Grammarly's leadership concluded that the definition of "better writing" is entirely situational. The most critical first step is not grammar, but clarifying the communication's goal—whether it's to inspire action, change an opinion, or simply inform—before writing a single word.
Effective connective labor goes beyond listening to facts; it identifies and articulates the "emotional message" beneath a person's story. Naming this feeling, perhaps with a metaphor, creates a powerful epiphany and makes the person feel truly seen.
A coherent picture of a person is built from heterogeneous, often contradictory, elements. Readers find this more convincing because it mirrors real life; everyone we know is contradictory. Instead of forcing a simple narrative, revealing inconsistencies makes a character feel more authentic and human.
The most effective way to convey complex information, even in data-heavy fields, is through compelling stories. People remember narratives far longer than they remember statistics or formulas. For author Morgan Housel, this became a survival mechanism to differentiate his writing and communicate more effectively.
When an LLM produces text with the wrong style, re-prompting is often ineffective. A superior technique is to use a tool that allows you to directly edit the model's output. This act of editing creates a perfect, in-context example for the next turn, teaching the LLM your preferred style much more effectively than descriptive instructions.
Bad writing often happens because experts find it impossible to imagine what it's like *not* to know something. This "curse" leads them to assume their private knowledge is common knowledge, causing them to omit jargon explanations, abbreviations, and concrete examples. The key to clarity is empathy for the reader's perspective.
When writing his book, Steve Garrity hired a developmental editor who did more than proofread. The editor cut 40% of the text and restructured the entire story to begin at the emotional low point, rather than chronologically. This highlights that an editor's greatest value can be in re-architecting the narrative for maximum impact.