Contrary to the advice of "write the subject line last," Dave Gerhardt starts with the headline or hook. This initial anchor helps frame the entire piece. Even if the first draft of the headline is imperfect, it provides a necessary starting point to react against and refine.
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Dave Gerhardt defines his copywriting skill not by its literary elegance but by its ability to grab attention and get a point across forcefully, yet tactfully. He applies this skill everywhere, from rewriting sponsor ads to helping his wife draft firm emails to a school.
Your website's headline should evoke a feeling, specifically the relief from a customer's core pain point. Instead of describing your product's function (e.g., 'AI tax assistant'), describe the emotional state it eliminates (e.g., 'Taking the terror out of tax season'). This connects with the user immediately.
Great copy guides a customer down a 'slippery slope' from attention to action (AIDA). The key is to describe their problem so intimately that they feel you uniquely understand them and must therefore have the solution, creating an irresistible pull towards your product.
Instead of trying to create something entirely new, effective copywriters begin their process by finding successful examples to model. Dave Gerhardt's first step for a new landing page or newsletter is to analyze best-in-class work from others to understand what works.
Instead of using AI to write final copy, leverage it as a brainstorming partner. Dave Gerhardt uses ChatGPT to generate 15 variations of a subject line. This process allows him to cherry-pick words and phrases, combining them into a superior, human-crafted final version.
The packaging of a lead magnet—specifically its headline—has a disproportionate impact on how many people opt-in. Businesses should spend more time testing the name and framing of their lead magnet rather than endlessly tweaking the content inside, provided the content solves a real problem.
A block of text, no matter how brilliant, will be ignored if it looks intimidating. Dave Gerhardt emphasizes that formatting—using headlines, sections, and clear structure—is a critical, underrated part of writing. The content must be visually appealing to entice the reader.
Positioning involves high-level strategic decisions about your market and competitors. Messaging is the critical next step: crafting the core sentences that bring that abstract strategy to life and direct all subsequent copywriting.
Data from Subjectline.com reveals a powerful, simple tactic for email marketing. Using a "continuation pre-header" that begins with "and," "but," or "plus" creates a narrative link to the subject line, sparking curiosity and significantly boosting open rates. This is an easy-to-implement test for any campaign.
The book title "Make Brilliant Work" is forgettable, while "Steal Like an Artist" is compelling because it contains a conflict—artists are supposed to be original, not thieves. This principle of juxtaposition can be applied to any writing by introducing opposing ideas to create immediate tension and capture attention.